Ver.1.4.38: Modified english document.

diff --git a/opengate/doc/Changes.html b/opengate/doc/Changes.html
index 9b23bfd..a542a7e 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/doc/Changes.html
+++ b/opengate/doc/Changes.html
@@ -619,10 +619,10 @@ Opengate History</H3>
        Changed value of ActiveCheckInterval. Modified install.html. 
        </DD><DT>
        Ver.1.4.37 at 2009.8.18 
-       </DT><DD STYLE="margin-bottom: 0.2in">
+       </DT><DD>
        Fixed Radius error. 
        </DD><DT>
-       Ver.1.4.38 at 2009.8.28
+       Ver.1.4.38 at 2009.9.1
        </DT><DD>
        Modified english document.(No modification to source) 
        </DD>

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-http.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-http.html
index 744eb18..2a9dae2 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-http.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-http.html
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 
 <p>You can use the network. 
 
-<p>When you finish to use the network, stop your WEB browser. 
-You will be disconnected from the network automatically.</p>
+<p>When you'd like finish using the network, close your WEB browser. You will
+be disconnected from the network automatically.</p>
 
 <script language="JavaScript">
 <!--
@@ -34,7 +34,8 @@ align=center bgColor=lightyellow border=1>
 <TR><TD>
 <b>
 <P align=center>
-If you move or close this page, the network is closed.<p>
+If you use this window for browsing or close this page, 
+the network is closed.<p>
 
 <P align=center>
 Click below button to create a new window for browsing.</p>

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-java.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-java.html
index ac65930..9619db9 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-java.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-java.html
@@ -9,7 +9,7 @@
 
 <p>You can use the network. 
 
-<p>When you finish to use the network, stop your WEB browser. 
+<p>When you'd like to finish using the network, close your WEB browser. 
 You will be disconnected from the network automatically.</p>
 
 <script language="JavaScript">
@@ -30,7 +30,8 @@ align=center bgColor=lightyellow border=1>
 <TR><TD>
 <b>
 <P align=center>
-If you move or close this page, the network is closed.<p>
+f you use this window for browsing or close this page, 
+network access will be denied.<p>
 
 <P align=center>
 Click below button to create a new window for browsing.</p>
@@ -63,7 +64,7 @@ Or, minimize this page and load other network programs.</p>
 
 <hr />
 
-<p>If yellow bar is not displayed between above two lines, Java does not run. 
+<p>If yellow bar is not displayed between above two lines, Java is not running. 
 In this case, please click <a href="%%TERMINATEURL%%"><b>TERMINATE</b></a>, 
  and close your browser. 
 Or you can run Java, if you download JavaPlugIn from 

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-time.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-time.html
index a6301eb..e914ef9 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-time.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept-time.html
@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@
 <b>%%DURATION%% minutes</b>.</p>
 
 <noscript>
-<p align=center><b>JavaScript is disabled. Change it.</b></p>
+<p align=center><b>JavaScript is disabled in your browser. Please enable it.</b></p>
 </noscript>
 
 <p>
@@ -24,12 +24,12 @@ align=center bgColor=lightyellow border=3>
 </p>
 
 <p align=center>
-The network is kept in open state during %%DURATION%% minutes as your 
-session. </p>
+The network is kept open for %%DURATION%% minutes. </p>
 <p align=center>
-After you go away, others may do an illegal use of your session.<br>
-To avoid trouble in hijacking, do not forget to click the below button <br>
-at premature end of your network use. 
+This will keep your session open for the indicated time period. 
+If you leave without closing your session, others could use it illegally!  
+To avoid trouble with hijacking, click the TERMINATE link on the accept page 
+when you want to stop using the network. 
 </p>
 
 

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept2.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept2.html
index 33d65b3..3884828 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/accept2.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/accept2.html
@@ -9,8 +9,8 @@
 You are authenticated. You can use the network.
 <P>
 <P>
-Your authentication is valid until you quit your browser.
-Do not forget to stop your WEB brower when you finish to use the network.
+Your session is valid until you quit your browser.
+Do not forget to close your WEB brower when you're finished using the network.
 </P>
 
 <HR>

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/httpkeep.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/httpkeep.html
index c0e7b39..eb69a90 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/httpkeep.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/httpkeep.html
@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@
 
 
 <p>You can use the network.</p>
-<p>When you finish to use the network, stop your WEB browser. 
+<p>When you'd like to finish using the network, close your WEB browser. 
 You will be disconnected from the network automatically.</p>
 
 <noscript>
@@ -28,7 +28,8 @@ align=center bgColor=lightyellow border=1>
 <TR><TD>
 <b>
 <P align=center>
-If you move or close this page, the network is closed.<p>
+If you use this window for browsing or close this page, 
+the network will be closed.<p>
 
 <P align=center>
 Click below button to create a new window for browsing.</p>

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/index-ssl.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/index-ssl.html
index b9ac558..4313799 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/index-ssl.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/index-ssl.html
@@ -15,7 +15,8 @@
 [<a href="https://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?addr=%%ADDR4%%&lang=ja">Japanese version</a>]
 <hr SIZE=4 WIDTH="100%">
 
-<P><font size=+1>You are requested to be authenticated before using network.
+<P><font size=+1>You are requested to be authenticated 
+before network access is granted.
 </font></P>
 
 <P><font size=+1>You will be authenticated with your user ID and
@@ -60,7 +61,7 @@ at the end of your network use.
 
 </center>
 
-<p><font size=+1>If you have some questions, please contact CNC.
+<p><font size=+1>If you have some questions, please contact the network administrator.
 
 <div align=right>Saga University</div>
 

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/index.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/index.html
index 0919549..59bb660 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/index.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/index.html
@@ -16,7 +16,7 @@
 [<a href="http://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?addr=%%ADDR4%%&lang=ja">Japanese version</a>]
 <hr>
 <div align=center>
-<P><font size=+1>You are requested to be authenticated before using network.
+<P><font size=+1>You are requested to be authenticated before before network access is granted.
 </font></P>
 
 <P><font size=+1>You will be authenticated with your user ID and
@@ -51,17 +51,17 @@ cannot be used continuously(unrecommended).</b><br>
 Required Usage Duration: 
 <INPUT TYPE="TEXT" SIZE="4" NAME="duration" VALUE="Auto">
 minutes(range: 1-%%DURATIONMAX%% minutes).  
-The network is kept in open state during this time as your session. 
-After you go away, others may do an illegal use of your session.  
-To avoid trouble in hijacking, click the TERMINATE link on the accept page 
-at the end of your network use. 
+This will keep your session open for the indicated time period. 
+If you leave without closing your session, others could use it illegally!  
+To avoid trouble with hijacking, click the TERMINATE link on the accept page 
+when you want to stop using the network. 
 <hr>
 </form>
 </p>
 
 </center>
 
-<p><font size=+1>If you have some questions, please contact network administrator.
+<p><font size=+1>If you have questions, please contact the network administrator.
 
 <div align=right>Saga University</div>
 

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/retry.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/retry.html
index e6e430a..e1a176a 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/retry.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/retry.html
@@ -11,20 +11,20 @@ The system cannot acquire client information.
 This page is displayed when the access key is not fresh.
 Please use as follows.
 <UL>
-<LI>Do not access by pointing this site manually.</LI>
-<LI>Do not access by the saved URL of this site.</LI>
-<LI>Do not change the string in URL</LI>
+<LI>Do not try to access this site by entering its URL manually.</LI>
+<LI>Do not try to access this site using bookmarks/favorites.</LI>
+<LI>Do not change the string in the URL</LI>
 </UL>
 </P>
-<P>Please access to any external site. 
-Then the authentication page is displayed automatically.</P>
+<P>Please try to access any external site. 
+The authentication page will then be displayed automatically.</P>
 <P>
 <A HREF=%%EXTERNALURL%%><H3>Retry from external site</H3></A>
 </P>
 <HR>
 <SMALL>
-<P>If you do not need IPv4/IPv6 dual stack support, enter from following pages. In this case, the system only controls one of IPv4 or IPv6.
-</P>
+<P>You can use one of the following links. 
+   In this case, the system will only control either IPv4 or IPv6.</P>
 <P>
 <a href="https://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?0-0-0&en">Network Authentication</a> 
 <a href="http://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?0-0-0&en">Network Authentication(Unuse SSL)</a>

diff --git a/opengate/javahtml/en/topindex.html b/opengate/javahtml/en/topindex.html
index 260bf9c..5d357e9 100644 (file)
--- a/opengate/javahtml/en/topindex.html
+++ b/opengate/javahtml/en/topindex.html
@@ -7,10 +7,9 @@
 <TITLE>OpengateStart</TITLE>
 </HEAD>
 <BODY>
-You will automatically enter to the page for <i>Network Authentication</i>
-by Opengate.
+You will be redirected to the Opengate <i>Network Authentication</i> page momentarily.
 <P>
-If you cannot move to the page automatically, click the following.
+If you are not redirected within a few seconds, please use one of the following links:
 <P>
 <a href="https://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?addr=%%ADDR4%%&lang=en">Network Authentication</a><br>
 <a href="http://%%AUTHCGIURL%%?addr=%%ADDR4%%&lang=en">Network Authentication(Unuse SSL)</a>